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5/4/10
My Entry: About the Time I went to the Hydrabad zoo (Hydrabad is a city in India)


When I went to India with my parents,we went to the zoo with my 2 cousins,my aunt,and my uncle. We saw White Tigers,Elephants,Peacocks,and many more, we also went on this train to see other animals ,I think most of them live in the Savanna/Grassland, like Giraffes,more Tigers,Lions,Lionesses,and more. It was super duper fun!!! We also took lots,I mean lots, of pictures of the animals like, Birds, both types of Tigers, and more. The zoo was in a city called Hydrabad which is a city in the state both my parents were born, it is Andra Pradesh.

A story about India would be so interesting. You have unique insight on what it was like. -Ms. Schwieters


5/5/10


I wish there were more books/stories about:
  • Comparing sport,outdoorsy type girls to all pick perfect girls
  • Sporty,outdoorsy type girl
  • Girls who travel to India
  • Siblings
  • Lives without siblings
  • Sicknesses
  • Cures for sicknesses
  • Names from all over the world
I especially like the one about curing sickness'. Keep up the great list making..-Ms. Schwieters


5/6/10

Issue:Allergic to something that everybody likes

There once was a girl who was named Alex and who was allergic to nuts, and everybody thought she was joking but that all changed one day.
How did this change you ask I will tell you.The bullying all started one day in kindergarten when nuts were allowed in the school Alex went to!Then when Alex told everyone that she was allergic to nuts,then at recess some 5th graders started pushing Alex and saying "Come on kid tell us", Alex says"Tell you what?",the 5th graders would say "You know that your not allergic to nuts"then Alex ran away.This happened every single day.Till one day Alex took one risk and ate a nut right in front of the 5th graders ,and then all of a sudden her face turns red and she's gasping for breath,so the 5th graders told the teachers and they called 911 and then Alex went to the hospital.That's when the 5th graders started to be nice to Alex. That's also how Alex proved to the 5th graders she was allergic to nuts.

Wow, how sad that Alex had to put herself in danger to get them to realize she needs help. Interesting thought especially since we are talking a lot about bullying.-Ms Schwieters



5/7/10

My story idea:The time i went to the Hydrabad zoo(the story at the top)

  • It is in India where it is very hot(winter:around 70 degrees summer:around 90-100 degrees)
  • Lots of different animals

Where is your character? You are giving me the setting, but I want character details! Ms. Schwieters


5/10/10

Character traits:
  • She used to be afraid of the dark when she was younger because she there was a Dark Monster of the dark
  • Allergic to nuts
  • 10 years old
  • name - Janessa (a girl)
  • Loves Soccer because she loves using her feet
  • Terrible at Baseball because she always hits the ball at people
  • SUPER at Skating because she has been doing it since she was 3 (for 7 years)
  • Hates playing Basketball because she thinks that she isn't tall enough loves to watch it because likes to watch T.V
  • Has 2 older brothers who love Hockey and Baseball loves to cheer them on at their hockey/baseball games
  • Has 1 younger sister who likes dolls (also has a collection of dolls)
  • Loves spring because the birds come out and it's in the middle of summer and fall

Keep it up! Tell me why Janessa loves and hates some of these things. How does she feel about her siblings? Why is she afraid of the dark?-Ms Schwieters



EXTERNAL

  • Medium long brownish blondish hair
  • Always smiling
  • Has a scar on her waist
  • brown eyes
  • usually wears shorts
  • Usually carries skates in her backpack to practice after right after school

INTERNAL

  • Active
  • Smart
  • Kind
  • Caring
  • Friendly
  • Can get very sensitive when mean things are said to her(does not show it)
Keep in mind that some of the things you have already written can be put into your list of traits. What are her weaknesses? Make sure she isn't too good to be true.-Ms Schwieters



5/14/10

Janessa:


Wants:


Yearns for:

  • *to travel around the world in skating competition *
  • 1 to travel to Colorado for the country competition
  • 2

What gets in the way:

  • *Not old enough to go around the world by herself and her parents are to busy working*
  • 1 Parents are to busy in work (so her best friends family is taking her) and won't give enough money for the entry fee